With strong roots in an Indian tradition,
She entered the house of her in-laws.
They looked all chirpy and their face glowed with smiles,
But inside they were hungry to satisfy their mirth,
By destroying her precious self-worth.
She wanted to build a home well knitted by love,
But she found herself caged in shackles of responsibilities,
That was not solely her own.
She needed her husband’s support,
But all she got was his ignorance,
She needed her mother in-law’s love,
But her heart got pierced by her sharp taunts.
She sought her father in-law’s blessings,
But all she got to hear was his insatiable greedy comments.
She was left alone in between these vultures,
Who sucked her inner peace and self-respect.
Every day she would sit on her balcony all by herself,
And introspect where she had been wrong,
But later on, she realized this is how a woman’s life has always been,
A sacrifice for everyone who was unjust and mean.
She had to give up her self-esteem,
Just to see her loved one’s faces beam.
She does all the household work,
While they greet her with a smirk.
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So sad.
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Yep it is. Nowadays women don’t get the freedom they desire.
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You are right.
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Thank you for reading Yassy. 🙂
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“No Words”.
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Hmm
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Women are the creator and destroyer of this entire universe, as “Creation and Destruction both are in hands of women”. One has to understand the meaning of Women why women are so indispensable for everything as they give birth to a newly star and rejuvenate their entire emotions silently.
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So true Sunny. They are more powerful but they are considered weak.
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So, Great Job, “Writing Machine”.
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In future, women will be the key factor of understanding the “Uncertain Emotions and Feelings”.
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Thank Sunny for your uncertain comment. 🙂
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Thank you for this post! It brings to light so many issues that need to be addressed in relationships and in cultures. It is very sad, but it’s reality. Unfortunate as it may seem. Great post, Sheetal!
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Thank you so much Kingston. And yes it’s a brutal truth which marks the future of every woman whether she is educated or not. Uneducated women face greater hurdles because they don’t really have an option.
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You are so welcome! That is so very true, and even for the educated women of the world…It’s still so hard to get passed the bad mentalities of mistakes made in the past. Keep up the amazing expression!
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Well stated. Thank you so much for reading. 🙂
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Salute for this strong poem Shee…
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Thank you dost. 🙂
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😁
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🙂
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True words. Keep it up!
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Thank you so much 😊
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This is really good, nice job!!
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Thank you so much sweetie 😊😍
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Sadly, the brutal truth. 😓
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Yes it is faced by so many women across the world.
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Nice one Sheetal. Well expressed.
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Thank you so much Aish.😊
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Welcome Sheetal.
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🙂
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Oh my God Sheetal!! I know all this so true for many women but I hope it’s not coming from a personal experience. I know it’s tough for all women but women are strong beings…we have the courage to sail through 🙂 Great poem.
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No it’s not. I am not married yet. (sigh of relief) 😛 Just read about it yesterday. Got on my nerves. It’s so sad that women have to suffer in the chains of marriage.
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Okk 🙂 Don’t feel so scared about marriage. Everyone has their own experience. Wish you good luck 🙂
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Haha no I aint scared. Marriage is a distant dream right now. I’ve got many more things to accomplish. Thank you so much for your kind words. 🙂
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Written so well !
A women make a lot of sacrifices in her whole life
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Thank you Shubh. Yes, she does but sadly it all goes unnoticed.
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Not like that now days people have different perceptions , lot of them are changing their mentality even they are empowering their daughters , sisters .
As you discussed about mother in law , sister in law
Why dude ? This is not fair even they are also women they are also sister ,mother of someone .
People are creating a negative mentality that pretty sure sister in law will be silly girl and mother in law will be Adolf Hitler 😂😂
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With due respect to your feelings, I strongly disagree with your viewpoint. I am not generalizing here but there are a lot of women who have faced this even the mother in law that you are talking about might have faced this torment in her own days. This is just revealing the plight that women have to go through . I am not creating or trying to spread any negative mentality here. Even I am against all negativity. Thank you for your feedback. 🙂
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😂😂😂I knew that you will not agree with my opinion
But I can’t stop my feelings even I believe in honesty that’s why I said so
Btw
Keep writing !
😀🙏
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Sure you have full freedom to express here. 🙂 Thank you so much. 🙂
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Huge respect from heart 🙏🙏🙏
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Thank you Shubh. Greatly acknowledged. 🙂
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😇😇
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Sad but true. Nice one! 🙂
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Thank you Sadaf. 🙂
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True. Scathing and apt!
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Thank you for reading.😊
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Touching!!!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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😀 Welcome Sheetal
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😀 😀
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So so true! This is the bitter truth of our Indian society. Well- written and I hope this poem reaches out to maximum people 🙂
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Yes dear. It’s sad that educated women also have to go through this trauma. I wish the same.😊
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divorce + Netflix and chill! 😏✌
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It’s very easy to say dear. But the reality hits too hard. 🙂
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I hope this is not written through experience!
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It is written through the experiences I saw and did read about. (not mine though. I’m happily single) But even when you think of divorce and to chill the society grills you under social pressures.
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True that.. I typed “fuck the society” then reality slapped me right in the face.. if you were a reader of the first few posts of my life in a series you’d know how I divorced and chilled lol!
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Damn I am yet to read that. I’ll do my task soon now. 🙂
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It is difficult being a woman. But at the same time I wouldn’t want to be
anything else. Lovely post 😊
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Yes such power can only be radiated by a powerful woman. 🙂
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