The smell of that perfume is still fresh in my mind,
As those memories of our prom play on rewind.
You wore a black suit and looked like a handsome lad,
When DJ started playing we were dancing like mad.
You took my hand in yours and flipped me in your arms,
I looked in your magical eyes and was lost in a trance.
We spoke to each other sitting beside the pool,
You looked quite nervous still you seemed to act cool.
Your thoughts seemed linked to my mind and my soul,
You seemed to be so perfect without any loophole.
We were also awarded the best couple of that day,
I felt so amazing and there was nothing more to convey.
Our silence seemed soothing, it felt so calm and serene,
I felt so close, as soulmates for ages, we had been.
When the prom got over you were nowhere to be seen,
You disappeared abruptly and acted so mean.
My eyes still search you in the lonely crowd,
As if I would hear you calling my name out loud.
You seldom appear in my dreams but I have no clue,
I think I have a crush on you.
Picture Courtesy: Pinterest
Such a beautiful poem decorated with mystic emotions & skillful usage of words. Thanks for sharing! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings as well, would love to know what you think about them 🙂
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Thank you so much. Will surely visit yours too. 🙂
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Great, Writing Machine”. “YOU ARE INVINCIBLE BEING AND CHALLENGES EVERY MEDIUM THAT ARE CONFINED WITH PAROCHIAL THINKING AND WHERE THOUGHTS BECOME NARROW”. Brilliant work “Thinker”, keep this momentum and “relishes your thoughts with lot of uncertainties”.
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Thank you so much Sunny. 🙂
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I can sense something…young lady camouflaging a lot…
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Writing a poem doesn’t mean I am camouflaging something. It just means I am aspiring for it. 😀
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Oh really…okay…I believe…
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Dhonyabaad. 😀
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Never fight with a lady I know very well…but keep writing on this aspiration of yours…enjoying reading them a lot…
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Haha thanks Mitra. 🙂 Never fight with a lady is impressive. 😀
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😀
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Wow such a wonderful poem Sheetal so skilful to the taste and the picture was so awesome.
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Thank you so much Ma’am. 🙂
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Welcome Sheetal
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🙂
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Crushes are always so special. The fondness and the feelings associated with it remains all through life. Very well penned Sheetal 👍😊
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Yes so true. That innocent feeling never dies even after years just a name is enough to scatter a smile on our faces. 🙂
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Keep writing poems like that then some guy over there going to have a crush on you lol. Impressive and insightful poem for sure. Salute!
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Haha Thanks Brainy. Let him have a crush. All his aspirations would then be crushed. 😀 😛
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That made me laugh. I am sure you will be nice to the guy. Keep hope alive lol
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Yeah this world lives on Hope. 😛
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Harsh dear! ,hehe
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But brainy sounds cool doesn’t it? 😀
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Yes..kinda cool .. Haha but a heartbreak to that ”someone”. Lol
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Oh! I thought it would rather be an impressive referral.😁
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Lol ask him Sheetal 😀
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Who’s heart would break? 😀
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Lol he is out there somewhere
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Let him be there where he is. Good for him. 😛
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And oh yeah thanks for reading and commenting on my newest post about the Indian Community on WordPress :D. Stop breaking hearts lol jk
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IWho’s heart is breaking? Lemme know I’ll fix it. 😀 😛
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Hahaha am sure he will like that.
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Hehe. 😀
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Lol
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😎
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Starting was beautiful and at last you made it emotional.
Crush word doest matter to me even I can correlate this story with mine 😀
Great job
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Thank you so much Shubh. I guess it would have happened with everybody. 🙂
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I am not sure
Very few people actually believe in one sided love otherwise most of them only do show off to trap a girl
M sorry 😂
BT I am honest
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Yes it’s actually a brutal truth. Well stated. And nowadays duping exists across both genders be it a boy or a girl.
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Yes exactly
Sadly
Money, looks,sexual needs,show off lot of parameters tends to love
That’s why we can’t say who is right or who is fake ?
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Yes well stated. People are just running after worldly pleasures nowadays. They tend to overlook originality and accept pretence as the higher order.
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Yeah exactly !😇
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Thanks for reading Shubh. 🙂
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Honestly blog reading is the only hobby of mine 😀
Aur koi time pass nahi Hai mere pass
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Haha Acha hai. It’s a productive thing to do. 🙂
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Haan time pura nikal jata Hai aur lgta v Ni h ki time waste Kiya Hai AJ
Even mere exams ane wale h phirr b
Aur upar SE ab bhut sare logon SE interaction ho gya h to comments m AISE hi baten bdi krk chatting jaisi ho jati h 😂
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Haan woh toh hai. Aur topic bhi mil jaata hai baat karne ko. 🙂
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Easiest way to stretch a conversation 😉
Kitna b bda khich lo
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Haan 🙂 😀
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Phle m Kisi SE baat nahi krta tha
BT Baad m automatically sbse interact krne LGA
You know confidence comes after an experience
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Haan this applies on everything. 🙂
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BT unluckily mujhe fear h
Directly Kisi girl SE interact Ni kr pata + stage fear + interview SE phle BHI aur koi important event m Jana ho jaha kafi log ho tb bhi ajeeb SA fear hota h
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Jab tum ye sab interviews and stage face karne lagoge na toh fear automatically gayab ho jaayega. You’ll feel more confident. 🙂
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Ni aisa Ni h uske liye Maine ab tk 15-20 interview face kiye h
M berojgar ki trah international call center m interview deta hua ghum RHA Tha last year
First interview m to pkka darr lgta h BT back to back 2-3 k Baad sb cool ho jata h
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Have confidence in yourself bas. Everything will be fine. 🙂
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Ye line bolne m aur pdhne m achii lgti h BT very few ones have good confidence
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Haan woh toh hai. 🙂
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Kuki ye chij human blood m Hoti h
AAP practice SE improvement kr skte ho ,confidence show kr skte ho mgr vo god gifted logon jaise Frank Ni ho skte stage par 😀
This fact has come after an experience
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So true. 🙂
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Conversation ko itna bda krne m
Mera Sath dene k liye dhanyavaad 😁
Phirr kbi milte h AISE hi
Now it’s high time to open the books so I am gonna switch off data .
Good bye
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Okay bye. All the best. 🙂
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I just love poems that rhyme… (You migt have got the idea after reading mine)
And it was amazing!!! 😊😊😊
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Yeah we the Rhymers. 😀 🙂 Thank you so much. 🙂
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Haha, that’s good to hear! We the rhymers!!
Have a great day, maybe night… 😊😊
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Thank you so much. I wish the same for you. 🙂
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Awesome post!!
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Thank you so much Riya. 🙂
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I loved the rhymes and the font color! It was a soothing read..and seemed like a very causal poem until I read the last line! That just shot the poem in flames.. I loved it!
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Haha. Thank you Dear. Glad that you loved them. ❤ Your comments are really heart warming. 🙂 I look forward to them. 🙂
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You brought me back to my prom 🙂 Thank you for taking me back to a time when life wasn’t near as difficult, though in our teen years EVERYTHING was difficult, right? Lovely poem and so creative, Sheetal. I love reading your art.
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Yes our childhood was the best part of our lives na? Thank you so much Kingston. 🙂 Much love. ❤
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The pleasure is mine! Thank you for writing for us ❤ Sending some love back!
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Pleasure is all mine. 🙂 Love and hugs back to you. 🙂 ❤
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Awesome😊😊😊
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Thank you sweetie. ❤
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Yr welcome😊😊😊
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🙂 🙂
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Lovely poem and really nicely written girl!!
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Thank you so much sweetie. 😍
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very nice post
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Thank you so much 😊
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Welcome
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😊
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Very beautifully penned. Reminds me of all those butterflies and the crushes. 😅
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Haha. I guess everyone is going to relate to this. 😁
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Made me kind of sad when I read he disappeared…it seemed so dreamy and perfect but was left incomplete :(…your writing is beautiful I must say
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Thank you so much. 😊
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you’re welcome 🙂
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😀
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Your posts are making me speechless Sheetal.
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Haha. Thank you for reading. 🙂
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Its a really sweet one
Loved it.
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Thanks man.😊
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Reblogged this on Site Title.
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Thank you so much and sorry for the super late reply. 🙂
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