Woah! I’ve made it finally. I am well within the time limit. So Mitra Here I go woohoo! My entry for this fortnight as rains is my favorite topic and I couldn’t miss this one.
The cool breeze brushes my face,
As I stand alone on my balcony,
Holding my cup of hot coffee,
Gazing at the starry sky,
Watching the slow drizzle,
Which mixes with cool breeze and makes my skin wet,
Those chilly droplets of water come in contact with my skin sending waves of vibrations inside me,
My mind is filled with your thoughts as I sip my coffee,
My fingers are wet with sprays of water pouring from the sky,
Your thoughts make me feel good after so long,
But I think the rain and coffee are having their effect on me,
They are making me numb to every pain that you left me with,
I cannot feel anything except peace now,
Because it’s over darling because we weren’t meant to be,
Finally, rains taught me to love again,
This time it’s not you but I’ve fallen in love with myself.
This is lovely creation. Having a sip of coffee or tea during is really amazing. Liked the way you depicted love towards rain. 👍☺️
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Thanks Ashish. 🙂
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I love the title a lot…
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Thank you, Prakash. 🙂
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Lovely thoughts.Your posts have an emotional component in it.
The way you describe things gives a perfect visualization.
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Thank you Manju. 🙂
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And I’ve fallen in love with the last line…Well written Sheetal! It’s a reminder to not to forget to love ourselves 🙂
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So true Vandana. Thank you for your appreciation. 🙂
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Wowww amazing
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Well well well…you goes off the prompt…Okay excused for being first time…
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Sorry but I saw that no human emotions after completing my poem.
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My challenge was Haiku or 6-words story…☺
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Theek ache. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Thoughts of Words and commented:
An Off the Prompt by co-hostess…
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Lovely sheetal 👌❤…do read my poetry ‘in the Rain’ .😁
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Surely. 🙂
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Awesome 👌🏻👌🏻 loved how you ended it👍
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Thamks Dear. 🙂
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I just loved the last line…that spoke so gently yet in a tone with strength. They say you find true love when you start loving yourself 😉
Keep writing 🙂
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Thanks Sushree. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Nice one,Sheetal 🙂
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Thanks Aish. 🙂
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Welcome, Shee 🙂
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Much love. ❤
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One must not forget themselves to please others. You are the only person you truly have. Again, a beautiful composition by you. Keep it up!
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thank you so much dear. 🙂
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You’re welcome hon 😉 🙂
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🙂
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