Amidst all the controversy,
You forgot how I felt for you,
You proved me to be unworthy,
Saying you wanted someone new,
I was left all shattered behind the bars of love,
Clinging to the leftover memories,
While you enjoyed the new moon,
I was clouded under deep miseries.
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Good one!
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Thank you Surbhi. 🙂
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First of all nice poem….second of all, you scared me mentioning NaPoWriMo Day 13….there still no notification from them for the day…
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Thank you so much Sangi. 😀 Yeah I know that. 😛 Whatever be the notification this would be my entry. 😀
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Sangi sound like a girl…call me Mitra…that sound more nice and pleasant…
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Haha. Okay but I found it cool. Nevermind we have zeroed on Mitra now. 🙂
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Yes Shee…if you wan an alternate name to call me then can use Sam…a portion of my misspelled name Sambad not Sangbad…
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Okay gotcha. 😀
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Great Job. “Writing Machine”. “Imaginative and Something Invincible”.
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Thank you so much Sunny. 🙂
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The heartache of abandonment is brought out beautifully in these verses. Fantastic!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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You’re welcome 😊
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🙂 ❤
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Nicely written.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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A feeling I’ve known too many times in this lifetime, I’m afraid.
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Don’t be afraid. It should make you more strong to tackle such situations. Coz you deserve much more. 🙂
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Beautifully written😊😊
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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“Clinging to the leftover memories”
Love how u used the word “clinging” it’s definitely a heart wrenching feeling to have left over memories that hurt..
“While you enjoyed the new moon,
I was clouded under deep miseries”
Painfully beautiful!
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Thank you so much sweetheart for reading it. 🙂
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While you enjoyed the new moon,
I was clouded under deep miseries.
Touching lines
Beautiful
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Thank you so much Shubh. 🙂
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🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much Roy.😊
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So relatable! Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.😊
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Behind the unpleasant bars! That was very nicely expressed. 🙂
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Thank you so much PH. 🙂
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As if they care
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Yeah true.
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Love the way you have correlated the words.
Brilliant usage of metaphor “While you enjoyed the new moon”. You nailed it.
Full of deepest emotions.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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