I am blindly following a path,
Which I know will one day tear me apart,
But I still have a hope in my heart,
That we will never ever part.
Because true love remains forever.
Though we keep numerous doubts buried between the four red thin walls,
But we know they are just too small to create a gigantic hole,
Because our love seems too strong and we do not feel much wronged,
And we wait until the right date, keeping faith on our respective fate,
Because true love remains forever.
But sadly, love drifts creating mood shifts,
We keep on rewinding the memories that we lived,
The love we received and the love we gave,
Disappears one day leaving us with no option but to just crave,
Because true love remains forever!
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Beautiful but true love will always live forever and that is a fact. Great.
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Thank you Ma’am. Means a lot. 🙂
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Welcome Sheetal have a great day
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You too.😊
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Thanks
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You are welcome. 😊
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Link not properly posted it seems…by the way a good attempt…liked it a lot…
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Thanks for informing me and for the compliment too. 🙂
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Not to mention dear
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😊😊
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😊☺😃
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🙂
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Good Job. “Writing Machine”.
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Thank you so much Sunny.😊
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nice one
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Thank you so much.😊
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Welcome
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😊😊
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“The love we received
and the love we gave,
Disappears one day
leaving us with no option
but to just crave” I wouldn’t say that’s relatable cause through the journey of darkness I’ve trained myself to never crave.. but that phrase was beautiful!
Loved the rhyme.. 👌
The green was a little too light for me!
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I will darken it a little so that nobody else faces a similar problem. Thanks a lot for the feedback.:)
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Pleasures all mine sweetheart! 😘
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😍😍
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Beautiful poem Sheetal. Blessed is the one who finds true love in life 💜
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True that. 🙂 Thank you so much. 🙂
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Good one. I really enjoy reading your poems 🙂
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Thank you so much. Glad that you enjoy them. 🙂
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This is so beautiful.👌
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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You’re most welcome :’)
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😊
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Beautiful and inspirational!
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Beautifully written Sheetal! I loved these two lines, so true :
“But sadly, love drifts creating mood shifts,
We keep on rewinding the memories that we lived”
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Thank you so much. Glad that you loved them. 🙂
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As much as I love how beautifully his was written, I must agree it got me seething as well. The truth in this is something so many of us would love to brush off. It is the very thing about true love. Since it lasts forever and if you’re not fortunate enough to ever experience it, it is the very thing that destroys us. Your poems really hit hard. Xx
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Rightly said Anya. Thank you so much for your precious compliment. 😊
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The love we received and the love we gave….once again your words did the magic.💓
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Thank you so much sweetheart. 🙂
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Yes indeed.. true love remains forever. Beautifully written. ☺
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Thank you so much Sweta. Glad you liked it. 😊
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Beautiful , true love stays..the epitome n immortality of love! Blessed times. Love.
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Thank you so much for the appreciation. 🙂
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