Knackered I entered the room,
The lights were dim, the bed untouched,
No sign of you, no presence of love,
I placed the keys on the table of dust,
Which was once the cradle of lust,
Every corner craved for the warmth of affection,
The air had gone stale exaggerating suffocation
The house seemed like a darkened den,
Where loneliness resides, where memories went plain.
I felt the same emptiness in me,
My heart was caged longing to be free.
I knew you were gone and I can never feel your touch,
But your memories are precious and I cannot let it disappear from my clutch.
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you had me at ‘keys on the table of dust’ ♡’d it!
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Thank you so much. 🙂 I loved yours too. 😀
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you dear. 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Much love. ❤
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Same to you!
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Oh Dear…such a lovely poem…
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Thank you Mitra. 🙂
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a disturbed smiley…not to mention…
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Haha Okay. 🙂
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☺
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Great…the special romantic memories….
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Great job, “Writing Machine”. You remind me “Emptiness of Space”. Sorry i again use the “Scientific Term”. However, your work represents the hope that kind of hope exists into emptiness when no one assists one’s thoughts.
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Thank you so much Sunny. 🙂 Really look forward for your scientific comments. 🙂
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Tragic, beautiful, thought provoking words are in this poem. I loved reading it! ❤
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Thank you so much sweetie. 😍
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Wow…heart-warming…sad but the words are beautiful 🙂
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Thank you Dear.😊 😍
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Yes, sometimes memories are all that we are left with…….an emotional one Sheetal ☺️
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True that. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Beautiful, sheetal 👍
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Loved it!
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Thank you dear. 🙂
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Oh, it’s so beautifully crafted!! Cheers, Charu 💛💛
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Thank you so much Charu. Glad you liked it. 😍
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Welcome 🤘🤘I will keep visiting… You writings are so compelling.
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Thank you so much. 😊
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That’s so beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you so much dear. 🙂
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Very heart touching and emotional poem. For the first time I landed here and I would love to come again 🙂
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Thank you Prachi. Glad you liked it. Much love. ❤
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But loneliness does teach us lots. Good one. Emotional… Keep up the good work.
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Thanks Almond. 🙂
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Ha ha. Almond
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Yeah your logo looks funky. 😀
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He he. Thanks.
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You are welcome dear. 🙂
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“I placed the keys on the table of dust,
Which was once the cradle of lust”
You had be right there! 👌
And the image with the moving curtains! I’d never be able to find an image that would suit this piece of writing more!
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Thank you so much Honey. ❤
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So beautiful. I love it!
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Thank you beautiful. 🙂
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Lovely…😍😍😍
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Thanks a ton. ❤
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Yr welcome😊😊☺
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Thnaks for dropping by. 🙂
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Nice intense and very touchy loved it. Its amazing cause people can totally resonate with this cause every one has felt it once in while
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True that. Thank you 😊
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