My mind consists of
A chain of your thoughts,
which form a maze-like structure.
It is hard to figure out,
as this puzzle gets on deepening.
I ponder at night,
I sit in darkness with my eyes closed,
My hands shaking to the mere ocean of your memories,
which appear like a whirlpool of waves,
churning my mind, drawing me towards its mess,
like a magnetic force, I try to move away,
but it’s effect turns my efforts into a waste of energy,
It slowly sucks my happiness and absorbs my peace of mind,
Sending me into oblivion, I have no option left,
But to lie on my bed and close my weary eyes,
As I surrender myself into night’s slumber,
till my ship passes this hurricane until I wake up
on the peaceful shore, all set to sail again.
🙋🙏👍👌👏
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😊 🙏
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well done. your posts are getting better by the day
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Thank you so much. Glad to know that my skills are improving. 😊
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👍🏻😁😊
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….to sail again….?
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Yes, that’s the catch! 😊
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I can totally relate to what kinda thought chain you were talking about. your description was really amazing and work with symbolism was really good.
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Thank you so much. I am glad that you could relate to it. 😊
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Wow. This one is an amazing piece. Loved the artistry of this poem. Very well done. 😀 😀
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Beautiful
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Thank you Shubh. 😊
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Great, ‘ Thinker’. Exactly “A Quantum Entanglement and Quantum Consciousness”. Mind is the God and Mind is Space. Only one entity can challenge the Albert Einstein’s Equation, that is E=mc2 is only mind which can travels faster than light.
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Thank you so much Scienoet. 🙂
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Soulful
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Thank you. 🙂
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You’ve found the perfect image to go with this amazing poem! 😏👌
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Thank you darkness. 😍
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❤ wow! That’s reference made my day! 😙✌
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Yayyy! And this comment made mine. ❤
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