A Crush On You

The smell of that perfume is still fresh in my mind,

As those memories of our prom play on rewind.

You wore a black suit and looked like a handsome lad,

When DJ started playing we were dancing like mad.

You took my hand in yours and flipped me in your arms,

I looked in your magical eyes and was lost in a trance.

We spoke to each other sitting beside the pool,

You looked quite nervous still you seemed to act cool.

Your thoughts seemed linked to my mind and my soul,

You seemed to be so perfect without any loophole.

We were also awarded the best couple of that day,

I felt so amazing and there was nothing more to convey.

Our silence seemed soothing, it felt so calm and serene,

I felt so close, as soulmates for ages, we had been.

When the prom got over you were nowhere to be seen,

You disappeared abruptly and acted so mean.

My eyes still search you in the lonely crowd,

As if I would hear you calling my name out loud.

You seldom appear in my dreams but I have no clue,

I think I have a crush on you.

Daily Prompt: Perfume

Picture Courtesy: Pinterest

95 thoughts on “A Crush On You

  1. Such a beautiful poem decorated with mystic emotions & skillful usage of words. Thanks for sharing! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings as well, would love to know what you think about them 🙂

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  2. Great, Writing Machine”. “YOU ARE INVINCIBLE BEING AND CHALLENGES EVERY MEDIUM THAT ARE CONFINED WITH PAROCHIAL THINKING AND WHERE THOUGHTS BECOME NARROW”. Brilliant work “Thinker”, keep this momentum and “relishes your thoughts with lot of uncertainties”.

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      1. Haan time pura nikal jata Hai aur lgta v Ni h ki time waste Kiya Hai AJ
        Even mere exams ane wale h phirr b
        Aur upar SE ab bhut sare logon SE interaction ho gya h to comments m AISE hi baten bdi krk chatting jaisi ho jati h 😂

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      2. Ni aisa Ni h uske liye Maine ab tk 15-20 interview face kiye h
        M berojgar ki trah international call center m interview deta hua ghum RHA Tha last year
        First interview m to pkka darr lgta h BT back to back 2-3 k Baad sb cool ho jata h

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      3. Kuki ye chij human blood m Hoti h
        AAP practice SE improvement kr skte ho ,confidence show kr skte ho mgr vo god gifted logon jaise Frank Ni ho skte stage par 😀
        This fact has come after an experience

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  3. You brought me back to my prom 🙂 Thank you for taking me back to a time when life wasn’t near as difficult, though in our teen years EVERYTHING was difficult, right? Lovely poem and so creative, Sheetal. I love reading your art.

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  4. Made me kind of sad when I read he disappeared…it seemed so dreamy and perfect but was left incomplete :(…your writing is beautiful I must say

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